Reflection

In Abigail is Fire I was comparing a character in The Crucible to an object that character resembled. In my Nature Essay I either had to agree or disagree with Emerson and Thoreau about their theory, Transcendentalism. In Abigail is Fire I learned how to describe one particular thing to another thing. I also learned how to you descriptive writing and to make my writing more interesting to read. In my Nature Essay I learned to describe my experience and use stronger details. In this class I have learned how to use better descriptions, write a thesis statement, and write a better introduction and conclusion.
In Abigail is Fire I did not write in present tense throughout the essay. Also, in the first paragraph I incorporated the title of the book and the author. In my Nature Essay I revised my introduction and conclusion. I also deleted my first sentence because it did not fit and I added a thesis statement.
In Molly's essay, Becoming A Christian, I liked how she did great detail describing how she felt. I also liked how she talked about thinking she had Jesus in her heart but really was not for sure. In Kacie's essay, Departure to Gauntlet, I liked how she talked about her nervous excitement about going to the Gauntlet. She used great detail. In Morgan's essay, Elevate, I loved how she used good detail about how she felt. I also liked hearing about how great an experince she had.